And the story continues.......

When Panchito and his family got deported to Mexico he didn’t seem happy because he was getting so happy that he was learning had to speak English. When Panchito got to Mexico he felt sad that he had to go back to Mexico. When he was at Mexico he was always alone in his room trying to at least learn more English and review what him in t he had now about English that they thought him in school when he was in California. While he was in California he had live a good life that he went to school, had a house and what to eat. Now that he got deported to Mexico his life is going to change the way it was when he was trying to cross the border to come to California.

So now that am in Mexico I have to live my life the same way as it was before. My mom has to wake up early to feed us and my little brothers so that we start to work to earn money. So now that we are in Mexico we have to live our life again just like before. Sometimes he feels lonely because in Mexico he doesn't have any friends anymore. Now that he is a little older he still has to take care of Trampita and Tronto. While his with them his dad, mom and his brother Roberto they all have to work again and maybe the same place or another job.

Now am at home with the family been the same like always it has. I really don’t like how we are always in my house nothing to do only to take care of Trampita and Tronto while no one is home. One day something had occur that Trampita, Tronto and I were really scared because we had heard some people screaming and we go outside to see what had happened and we se some people crying because they had ran over their kid. When my mom came with my dad and Roberto they asked what had happen and if we were okay. I said yes we are okay and they ran over the lady’s kid and the car just left and didn’t even stop to see if the kid was okay. Then they told us to go in or else it might happen to us. So we got in and started to eat and watch TV. When we were watching TV we heard a noise in the kitchen. We go and check if there were something and a dog appears to be crying because it was hungry and cold.

I told my mom if we could keep him and she said sure we can as longest it doesn’t hurt Tronto and trampita ok. So we go to the vet shop to check him and then so that we can take him back home save and with shots. When we were sleeping we had made a bed for our dog which we name him chocolate. She was half bagel and half mix he had black and brown color hair. He looked like if he was younger and still a baby because it was really small. The next morning comes and we see that chocolate was awake and we get ready to take him to the vet to get him clean and with shots.

 When we got their the vet was like “que lindo perro” and my mom said “gracias” so we sit down so that they check him and put him the shots when a lady comes in to see if they seen her lost dog.  The vet said how does your dog looked like and the dog were like chocolate. We were like that’s the dog that she is looking for and we were like we found this dog in our house but this is your dog. The lady was like oh my god that is my dog that’s my little baby girl Cici. We were like oh here then it belongs to you we had found him because it got in our house barking. Oh ok then here is a reward for 100,000,000 dollars for finding my dog and returning to me thank you so much.

So I and my mom looked at each other and we accepted the money and we went home even though we were sad that we had to give chocolate back to his owner. When we got home my dad and brothers were like where’s chocolate and we were like we had to give her back to her owner because she had arrive to the vet shop when we were at the vet. So she gave us 100,000,000 as our reward because we had gave her dog back. At least e have money to pay the bill and but food, clothes and medicine to be able to survive here. We will still continue to work to save up money so that we won’t be like we don’t have money to pay anything or buy things.

So now that we have money we can do anything we want but to try to save our money so that we have enough money. We all had new clothes and were really happy that we had food and clothes. Many of the kids were looking at me because I had new clothes and I had money to buy things and food at school. A lot of the kids asked me were and when did you get money and I was like I got the money from a reward that they had gave me because I had found a dog and they gave us a reward. We were happy and sad at the same time because we had to give the dog back to her owner and we were happy because we had gotten our reward. So now that we have money we can do a lot of things to do and we would be happy that we had a lot of money. So we live happily ever after with the whole family save, healthy and rich.

images tell a story



1.This picture represents how Panchito and his family had to cross the boarder.

2.This picture represents how Panchito use to be alone all the time in mexico & California

3.This picture represents how Panchito's family were in & out.

4.This picture represents were they live when they were working.

5.This picture represents were they use to be to pray for their angel.

6.This picture represents how they got gifts when they were in Christmas even if they were poor.

7.This picture represents how they believe that they will survive together to go to California.

8.This picture represents when Panchito's dad, mom and brother Roberto use to collect  in their job.

9.This picture represents where they had their life as a circuit.

10.This picture represents how they had to learn how they work in California and how they had to live with.

11.This picture represents how Panchito and his family  have to and to hold their way they live in California.

12.This picture represents where panchito and his family were deported  to mexico.

The Circuit

            Pancho, am a young boy who i live with my  family in a small pueblito in Mexico called El Rancho Blanco. My  families dreams about living in a place where Papa will earn good money and we can live in a house with electricity and running water. Papa decides that we will all cross la frontera, the border between Mexico and California, so that we can have a better life. We find this really difficult to go to california together. The train is loud and noisy and the ride lasts for several days.
            Eventually we reach la frontera which Pancho is surprised to find is “no more than a gray wire fence where there were armed guards.”  When we got to California we didn't imagine it like this would be like. My parents and my big brother Roberto work all day in the strawberry fields while am with my two younger brothers trampita and torito. When strawberries are out of season, we have to move and find work in other fields. Instead of a house with plush carpet, we live in a tent. In between work, i find time to be friends with a boy name Miguel. Sadly, i  lost Miguelito, because he has to move away from Tent City because his family needs to earn more money.
           Nothing is permanent when you live in Tent City. Soon, i started school. I find school difficult because i really dont understand English. But school does have its benefits. I excels during art time. Inspired by the classroom caterpillar,I draw a beautiful picture of a butterfly.
           One cold day, Miss Scalapino discovers that i don’t have a coat. The principal, Mr. Sims, gives me a jacket from the “Lost and Found.” However, it turns out that the coat belongs to Curtis, the biggest and most popular kid in class.Curtis wants the jacket back, but because i don’t speak English, i don’t understand what Curtis is saying. Me and curtis start to fight. I was embarrassed after the fight and i stop participating in class. I don’t realize that the other kids think i was brave for standing up to Curtis until his friend, Arthur, tells him so.
           Soon, i was more comfortable in class and start to understand more and more English. One day, Miss Scalapino announces that my picture of the butterfly has won first prize at a children’s art exhibit. Later that afternoon, I notice that the class caterpillar is breaking out of its cocoon. I open the jar and everyone watches the butterfly fly away. After school, Curtis asks if he can see my picture. Curtis tells me that am a good artist. I gives Curtis the picture as a sign of friendship.

          Suddenly, immigration guards arrive at my school. Mr. Sims announces that me and my family are being deported back to Mexico. So i had to go back to mexico because i wasn't born in california. Atleast i had a chance to learn atleast english. So now that am back in mexico i can't go back to california or else i would go through all the things all over again to ba able to go to califronia.

Fransico Jimenez when he was a little boy.

Francisco Jimenez

He was born in Tlaquepaque, Mexico, in 1943, Francisco Jiménez grew up in a family of migrant workers in California. He spent much of his childhood moving around California with no permanent home or regular schooling, yet he went on to have a distinguished academic career. He graduate of Santa Clara University, he also attended Harvard University and received both a Master's Degree and Ph.D. from Columbia University. He went on to become chairman of the Modern Languages and Literatures Department at Santa Clara University, as well as director of the Division of Arts and Humanities there, and has been director of the Mexico Summer Study Program at Universidad Nacional Autonoma de Mexico. Long a writer of academic works for adults, Jiménez's entry into writing for young people came through an award-winning short story, “The Circuit,” based on his childhood. In 1997, Jiménez combined the story with others into the autobiographical volume The Circuit: Stories from the Life of a Migrant Child, which won numerous awards, including the Americas Award for Children's and Young Adult Literature. He followed this achievement with the picture book La Mariposa, another autobiographical work that looks at the difficulties faced by a non-English-speaking child in an English-speaking classroom. His exploration of the melding or memoir and fiction continued with The Christmas Gift/El regalo de Navidad, a bilingual illustrated book about the sources of humanity and strength that exist even in the face of poverty. His newest book is Breaking Through, his award-winning sequel to The Circuit.His primary goal in writing both scholarly and creative works is to fill the need for cultural and human understanding, between the United States and Mexico in particular, writer and professor Francisco Jiménez once commented. He has taken a major step towards this goal with his autobiographical collection The Circuit: Stories from the Life of a Migrant Child. This award-winning book provides young readers with an intimate portrait of life growing up in a Mexican American migrant family. In depicting both the hardships and the hopes of Mexicans who move through California in search of work, The Circuit "fills a void in novels for young people," a New Advocate reviewer stated. Jiménez was born in Mexico in 1943, the second child in a family that would eventually include nine children. When he was just four, he and his older brother Roberto entered the United States with his parents, who were seeking to escape the poverty of their small Mexican village.Some of the books that he wrote were: The Circuit, Breakin Through, Cajas de Carton, Reaching Out, La Mariposa, and Mariposa.

Dear Ms.Vallejo

You should read this book because it talks about how a boy name Panchito talks about what he live his life passing the boarder. He had gone thru a lot of pain because they didn't have enough money, job or a place to be. For example when Panchito was with his brothers in the car while his parents had to go to work with his older brother Roberto. They had to pick up cotton and strawberries. While Panchito was teking care of Trampitas his younger brother and Torito his other younger brother. Panchito's mom wakes up so early to make breakfast for the workers and for her family. This book is really intresting to read because for the people that don't now how people cross the boarder and how he live to come to california. Many of the people that don't like reading that much they could choose this book becauseit shows how people hot to live crossing the boarders to california. If you are from mexico you only have to cross one boarder to go to california. Usually if your not from mexico you cross two to four boarders to come to california. When i read this book i though it was kind of interesting but when i finished this book i was so suprise that i wanted to read more books like this one. During the book i would imagine how my parents how to live their life in mexico and that they had to cross the boarder to come to california. i would recomand to the people that would like to now some things about mexico and how people cross the boarders. But if you are not from maxico like if your from el salvador than you have to cross two boarders to go to california. If you are guatemalen you have to cross three borders to go to california. Lastly, if you are from Honduras you have to cross four borders in order to go to california. its really sad that this three countries have to cross two to three boarders to be able to go to california. When they come here to california they change because here is really different than their countries.I really wan't people to read atleast this book so that they could understand how their parents had a worst life and we as kids can have a better future than our parents did. Many of the kids don't understand what their parents how to live their life. In this book a youn boy had to see how his parnets and his older brother Roberto had to work in order toearn money so that they can be able to live to ba able to go to california. I would be happy if you read this book because its really intresting to read mostly when its about the borders that people had to cross to go to california.
                                                                                                             Sincerly,
                                                                                                         Yalitza Ramirez

test taking strategies

  My plan to be able to get ready for the benchmark is to review. i had to review for all of the subject that i had first then the next 2 subject the next day. I would practice math problems for the algebra 1 benchmark.Then i would rest for a little while and then go back to reviewing. I would review math english first before history and science.
  Then the next day i would review for the science and history. After i review those two subjects i would ask my big brother to quiz me to see witch one i now and witch one i don't now. I would practice more for the math benchmark to able to be prepared for the algebra 1 benchmark. For the english i would review my notes. then go to sleep earlie to be ready to take the benchmarks the next day.

• make flashcards
• review notes
• benchmark releaste test questions
• practice
• have good rest

ballad poem

I am a slave
Slavery is horrible
Slavery is bad

We worked day & night
We barely rested
Never stop working 

A lot of us die cause of disses 
We mostly didn't ate 
Always made to be strong

Some of our bosses treated us badly
We talked back often
But we get punished

Sometimes i wan't to live slavery
But usually i have to be strong until slavery ends
I will try my best to stay alive during the slavery

Poetry Terms

Sound Devices

1. Rhyme: Using the same vowel and consonant sound at the end of two words.
2. Repetition: Using the same word or phrase more than once
3. Alliteration: Using the same consonant at the beginning of words

Devices:

1. Symbol:Is an object, person or idea that stands for something beyond itself
2. Imagery:Words and parses that appeal to your senses
3. Fugitive Language-Metaphor: Is a description of one item as if it were another, without using "like" or "as".   
4. Simile: Is a comparison of two apparently unlike items that uses "like" or "as"
5. Personification: Is a description of something non-human as if it were human 

Forms & Purpose

1. Narrative- Tells a story
2. Ballad(narrative)-Is a story similar to folktale or legend and often has a repeated refrain 
3. Lyric Poem-Its a type of emotional songlike poetry, distinguished from dramatic and narrative poem 

narrative poem

When i had my first kiss in third grade
He love when i had my hair in breads

We were young but we still did it
Not all people would do it


Many of us had a lot of great times together
Sometimes we shared things with each other
Months pass and were still together
We will never be apart from each other


We all started on the same day 
We play outside together when its sunny
We ate chocolates bunny's 
He use to make me laugh because he was so funny


We watch soccer games
He act the same
He ain't no dame
In my world he is fame


My mom use to get mad
I said"he ain't bad"
I had good grades 
Never low grades


We use to say never be apart
We always be together no matter what
We hugged, hold hands all day
When we kiss it comes out sunny 


We use to say"i love you"
We would have great times
We were together for nine months
Wrote i love you in different fonts


Then we started to fight
I couldn't sleep all night
Because i couldn't stop thinking about you
You realize that when we broke up

Historical Context

1. During the holocaust there were about 6 million Jews that were murdered or persecutive. Some of them could been killed by not been strong on the job. Mainly they got killed because they wouldn't like them because they weren't the same as the Nazis.
2. It took place in Germany, Poland. Poland is the main place were everything was happening because it was in Germany. Most of the Jews were killed in this place or they survived the holocaust.
3. The Jews couldn't go outside in the night. The Jews weren't allowed to be outside or else they would be killed. Sometimes they wanted something but they couldn't go because they didn't want to get killed until the next morning.
4. There were a lot of concentration camps during the holocaust. One of the concentration camp was in Berlin it was the women/girls concentration camp. The men/boys concentration camp was in Auschwitz.
5. Some of the Jews were gotten killed by the gas chamber or because they were unhealthy or not strong. The gas chamber wasn't a good place because they made the Jews to go in and then turn on the fire until they would die, so whenever they saw pollution that was because Jews were getting killed. It was easier for the Nazis to killed a lot of people instead of shut them.
6. Sometimes the Jews didn't have other place to go but to go to the concentration camps. Not all the time they worked so they have to stay in a cabinet. if they wouldn't do what they were order to do they get sent to the gas chamber so that they could die in the fire.
7. Some of the Jewish were killed because Adolf Hitler told them to killed them. Adolf Hitler was not the type of guy that would get along with the Jews. He use to be races to the Jews and sent the Nazis to go killed them and he was happy when they were killed.
8. When the Nazi came a lot of the Jews would run away to try to hide from the Nazis so that they wouldn't be killed. Basically the ones that ran were hiding to other places were they wouldn't been found but they actually were killed any ways. Not all the Jews had a good life and/ or a long life to be with there family.
9. The mens/boys and women/girls were sent to different concentration camps to work.Most of them died because of a disses or were weak. Others survived and went to go live to america to make a new life. 
10. When they were in the concentration camps they had to use the same clothes no matter if it was dirty or smelled and they mostly gave out a load of bread.when they wanted to go to the restroom they couldn't they had to use it were they were. so a lot of them couldn't stand the smell they were dieing because of the smell and hunger. 
11. Many of the kids didn't get to go to school. A lot of the kids learned a lot but they weren't able to study because they were Jews. if they liked them then they would stay and learn meanwhile the other ones couldn't. 
12. Some of the Jews survived the holocaust and others died. The ones that died were mainly old, unhealthy and couldn't work anymore. The ones that survive went back to there homes but didn't had things so they came to america to live.

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Anne Frank

It takes place in Amsterdam, Holland in the year 1945. Anne and her family hides in an attic for two years away from the Nazis. Then they let the Van Daan’s to live with them in the attic because they were also Jews. When they were there in the attic peter comes in with his cat and Anne was mad that she couldn’t bring her cat and he did.  Then Anne and peter started to argue that it wasn’t fair that he could bring his cat and she couldn’t because I was going to eat all the food. So they were there living in the attic quite without making a noise when Mr. Kraler ask them if Mr. Dussel could stay and live with them for a night or two until he finds another place to hide. Mrs. Van Daan said “but we are running out of food” and Mr. Kraler said “it’s just for one or two nights until they find another place.” So now Mr. Dussel is move in with the Franks and the Van Daan. Now Anne shares room with Mr. Dussel so Margot sleeps with her parents. Anne and peter learn thanks to mieps book that she brings them. Its winter and they are celebrating Hanukkah but Mr. Dussel doesn’t now a lot about Hanukkah because he doesn’t practice Judaism. During this celebration Anne and Mr. Frank give out gifts to everyone with whatever she had and made it into a gift. Later on peter gets on a chair to get something and he lose balance he fell of a chair and cause to make a loud noise. Everyone thought that the green police discovered nut the thief that entered to got scared when peter fell of the chair and left with the radio and cash box. After that had happened they were scared because the thief might of snitch on them because they were living in the attic and no one knew about it. So then later on the green police come and get the all of the people that are living in the attic and send them to concentration camps. In the end the only one that survives was Mr. Frank and the rest died of sickness or of their weakness.